荒岛
本帖最后由 石秀 于 2021-3-1 11:44 编辑荒岛（现代诗）文/石秀2021/2/6周六
这是一座荒岛，多年来几乎无人踏足。
树木自然生长，无人修剪与砍伐，葱郁中略显荒芜。不沿水的岩石，带着原有的棱角，缺少圆滑世故。
水漂来远方的垃圾，风吹来尖刻的流言，鸟粪遍布小路，兽类踏坏花草无数……荒岛默默无语，不争不诉，不忧不怒。
这里心胸坦荡，从不优待或歧视岛上万物。却不愿外来宾客打扰，习惯了自由呼吸、时光静度，从不觉得荒凉与孤独。
A Desert IslandBy Shi XiuFeb.16,2021
This is an uninhabited islandWhere almost no one has set foot for years.
Trees grow naturallyWhich no one prunes and cuts down.So they seem slightly barren although lush.The rocks not along the waterStill keep their original edges and corners,For which they are short of sophistication.
The water drifts here distant rubbish.The wind brings here bitter rumors.Bird droppings are all over the paths.Beasts trample countless flowers and plants.However,the desert island is silent,Without dispute, complaint, worry or anger.
The desert island is open-minded ,Which never privilege or discriminate everything here.But it doesn't want to be disturbed by foreign guests.Getting used to free breathing and quiet time,It never feels desolate or lonely.
韵律和谐，意境优美；文采飞扬，清新典雅；泼墨传神，情景交融；形象生动，感人至深！感佩才情，点赞问好！ 红云阁主 发表于 2021-3-1 18:25
韵律和谐，意境优美；文采飞扬，清新典雅；泼墨传神，情景交融；形象生动，感人至深！感佩才情，点赞问好！
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