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发表于 2022-7-30 17:12
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气氛营造,落花流水,飞燕斜阳。
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发表于 2022-7-30 17:15
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对仗2整,相知情重!好联!
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发表于 2022-7-30 17:17
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三字对好!劝友亦劝己,既有牵挂,也有洒脱!
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发表于 2022-7-30 17:21
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好结!风雨催行,来田再会!豪爽,男人间的友情!
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