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[律诗] 五律.闲居 |
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发表于 2023-2-17 21:54
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发表于 2023-2-17 21:54
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时光飞逝,闲居少邻。
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发表于 2023-2-17 21:55
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承接首联,闲生心静。
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好联意佳,尤喜是“事去境方新”!
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乾坤轮转,茶浓味醇,耐品!
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