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[律诗] 月夜赏荷 |
发表于 2022-7-17 15:29
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错开音步,对仗工整。意境唯美。扣题!
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发表于 2022-7-17 15:32
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发表于 2022-7-17 15:36
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月夜泛舟莲湖,太有情调了!
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